Thursday, 16 June 2016

Animals At The Zoo

Hope you like my report for Animals At The Zoo

4 comments:

  1. Hi Aaron I like your writing, It was hard writing my one. I think you need to work on having REAL pictures. I did it to thought!

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  2. Hi Aaron, I really like your work but next time I think you could have a little bit more information.

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  3. Hi Aaron my name is Mercedez and I come from E.h.s in Papakura . i like the way you did your pepeha but practice your moria words. Or ask someone in your class to help you

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  4. I like your blog it is so good and has no rong spelling I can give you an adword for doing great.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.